The fall…
Her bare feet barely touch the floor,
As she ran, as she tore.
Trudging through the forgotten lands,
Leaving the unforgiving shore behind, so far.
Her breath escapes staggered,
Desperate.
The beating of her heart.
Boom boom, boom boom.
Which way to turn,
No where to go, no one to hear.
Her damp hair sticks to her.
Hands wet, fear.
Her face swollen, heart torn
She stops,
The horizon stares back.
The salty air blows past.
No time, her lifeless eyes close.
Hell was beckoning.
A burning desire to fight,
She held out her arms.
Let them try,
A gentle nudge,
She let go.
In order to fly, one must first…
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“A gentle nudge,
She let go.
In order to fly, one must first…” I agree. A outstanding poem.
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You are bringing me a lot of smiles friend! Thank you, should you ever wish to discuss any of my work, feel free to. 🙂 thank you for your kind words.
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I will more later. I’m off to work. I was glad I found you today. I will add you to my favorites.
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Well thank you! You’re rather talented yourself. And I am off to bed, but do keep your feedback coming, you seem to know a lot about poetry and the likes from the looks of your blog! Have a great day wherever you are 🙂
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