Into the darkness that engulfs the soul
One choice that could not comply
A tear stained pillow
Take me to the fields of lilies
Whereby I may mourn
Where hope is left to dwindle
And joy is no more.
Thanks for reading my short poem! I hope you liked it, this poem emerged from a lot of pain and I had a lot of inspiration from the wonderful ‘William Wordsworth’ and his beautiful poems. I thought a twist to the nature was needed to describe how I felt. Lillie’s are nicknamed the ‘mourning or death’ flower, they also happen to be my favourites. Sometimes sadness is a necessary emotion, an emotion that must be acknowledged and felt as deeply as any other, we tend to avoid feeling such a raw emotion, preferring happiness or love. This short poem follows the protagonists need to accept their sorrow, and feel it as they should. If you liked this poem, check out my other WordPress posts, I have many more, if you have any thoughts or suggestions comment them. I LOVE hearing feedback so please do so if you can! Thank you!
I love that you took your deep emotions that you were feeling and turned it into something as beautiful and simple as this. I love the amount of time and thought you put into your work as well, and your message at the end left me with knowledge that I didn’t have before. So I’ve nominated you for a challenge (: I really would like to see what you can come up with! My latest post has all the details!!
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Hi, oh my gosh, thank you! I am so sorry I have just seen this now! I will check it out now! Thank you for nominating me and for commenting and liking my poem 🙂
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No problem!! I can’t wait to see what you create!
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Thanks the first one is up!
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I have enjoyed your poetry. Honest, strong and beautiful words.
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Thank you for your feedback! I am glad someone connects with my poetry 🙂 It means the world to me, so thank you!
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I liked your poetry and you are welcome.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry by a talented writer. Please read and enjoy.
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Yas, I’m here! Beautiful poetry. So raw, has depth in its brevity and I can relate😊
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Oh thank you! Do you like the others too? Which one of you like best? All the best 🙂 x
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I’m yet to read the others but I sure will. When I do, I’ll let you know which else I love 😊
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Well thank you, I look forward to it 🙂
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You sure do 😆
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I just started following and I’m definitely sharing to my twitter. My lunch couldn’t get any better. Well done.
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Aw thank you so much you made me smile a lot 🙂
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